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You Are The One

The moon was curascating with all it's might as the leaves calmly danced with the breeze. Slowly yet peacefully they moved in a circular motion until a young blond sudenly moved between them, causing the leaves to seperate from one another. His heart was racing as he was trying to make it to a certain location as fast as he could. Being irratated from how slow he was moving with the cloak on he stripped it off and let it go. Looking back he was 100% sure that he wasn't being followed, but by not paying attention he suddenly crashed into someone which caused the person and himself to fall their seperate ways. The blond closed his eye as his ba

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Sorrow's Love-6"So what do you want to do?" Sasori asked looking straight at her.
"Is there anything good on tv?" she said quickly looking at the screen.
"Well why don't we go...watch the moon and talk outside? It's very lovely at night," she suggested shyly. He smiled a bit and nodded. They both got up and headed to the patio.
"You're right, it is," he said looking up as he took a seat.
"Yeah, doesn't it just relax you?" For about an hour they talked about random things. When it was around 10:00p.m. Neokanie went to bed since she had school. She felt good that Sasori wanted to help Sorrow's Love-6
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Sorrow's Love-5"Why are you so down?" Sasori asked as Neokanie quickly jumped up. He noticed she was crying when she didn't anwser him in the living room.
"I-it's nothing," she replied wiping her tears. All of a sudden Sasori pulled her to him and gave her a hug, she couldn't resist his sympathy so she cried into his chest.
"Ah, first day wasn't what you planned. You know you can talk to me about it. I'll listen," he said softly. She had a warm feeling inside. I think I'm falling inlove with Sasori, he's just so...so sweet, she thought as she smiled warmly.
"Thanks, but really I-I'm okay now," she sai Sorrow's Love-5
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Sorrow's Love-4Class was okay, only a bit. Every time Neokanie was called for something they'd start coughing and saying something. If only she could use her kenkai genkai, but unfourtuantley her dad wouldn't allow it for now. Once the class ended she walked around the hallways before she went to study hall. How come I get that class so early, I didn't even get homework yet. Oh well, she thought as she sighed and sat at an empty table by the window.

I'll never make any friends at all, she repeated to herself. Quit saying that to yourself, Neokanie. Maybe someone may want to be your friend. You should never think negative. Ever. But I do anyway Sorrow's Love-4
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Falling Apart-6Natalie growled and chased him, making him fall she began tickling him. He started laughing.
"S-stop it,un!" he laughed.
"No way, I wanna know what your planning! I won't stop until I know your telling me the truth!"

"We- we're going to wake everyone, un!"
"So what! I don't care! Tell me!" Hmph, i'm not that shy, brother. I wanna know and i'm not joking for now!
"Okay okay, un!" he said pushing her off him a bit. She jumped back a bit as he got up.
"I'm not planning anything, un. I just think it's nice that he wants to get along, is that so bad, hmm?" he asked. She Falling Apart-6
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Falling Apart

Wed Aug 27, 2008, 7:39 AM

Ummm, I just wanted to let everyone know that I re-edited the story and also updated up to chapter 2.

I'm defiantely interested in the comments I might get about the writing.

Also I am even going to post my "Either Way Love Is Like Art" love story which is up to chapter 2 and a few one-shots now and then.

If you have any requests for one-shots only than don't be scared to request.

I have pictures but I'm still deciding whether I should color them or not. frankly I think my images look bad in color. Advice on that would be appreciated!

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